Not enough drums
Please consider adding some percussion to compliment this work
Not enough drums
Please consider adding some percussion to compliment this work
AMAZING
zErO-BaSs
Needs a lot of work
I'd rewrite the bass and scrap the latter half of the song. Overall, the electronics could use a lot of work. Shoot me a PM if you'd like some help.
0/0
This needs a melody and basic musicality before I can listen to it.
skip to 2.12 if you want melody >.>
You appear to suck at music
That said, I loved it! Keep making more.
omg, you suck too! thanks! :)
Needs serious work
The lead melody is very annoying, you should use a different patch. The sound effects are annoying too and should just be removed. Drums are too loud and overpower the melody and the bass doesn't lock too well with them. It's also very repetitive, you have a theme but no variation. All music consists of theme and variation as shown through the classical style. You need to have development, return to the theme, more variation and an ending based on the theme for it to be true music.
Sorry but those are the rules.
Alright
I've heard better music for breakfast. You have something going there with the electronics, but work needs to be done on the melody and structure. I could offer some assistance if you'd like. I have classical and electronic training and am always open to PM.
Merely okay
Your melody lacks tension and release. The whole thing is very unoriginal. In fact, I only see promise in the 4/4 kick drum and there's plenty of that already in existence. If you'd like, I give production lessons on my youtube page. I'm both classically and electronically trained and I'm willing to help.
Gut
Es ist sehr punktlich. Ja! Schnitzelgruben. Ein flug mit dem gesicht ja danke es ist gut mir. Haha, ich hab ein grosses Schwollenkoch.
What? xD
Thanks for the review. =)
5/5
Expirimental and amazing
I've read No Logos by Naomi Klein, but it failed to teach me anything I didn't already know. I'll listen to anything but country and rap.
Age 39, Male
Staffer
Oxford College/ Social Science
Ohio
Joined on 5/13/06