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[-API- Paradise on E [REMIX]]

Try again

It's been done to death man. Bring a new song to life, like I am. Take some risks. Dabble with atonality -- or hell, even explore further classical technique and variations on electronics. You can bust out more than the ditditdit trance hits. If you want some ideas or assistance with new musical directions, drop me a line.

[Ghost of Don Juan]

Not enough drums

Please consider adding some percussion to compliment this work

[*I'm A Raver* // ZeRo BaSs]

AMAZING

zErO-BaSs

[Scottimus]

Needs a lot of work

I'd rewrite the bass and scrap the latter half of the song. Overall, the electronics could use a lot of work. Shoot me a PM if you'd like some help.

[(-Kasura-)]

0/0

This needs a melody and basic musicality before I can listen to it.

scoutzero responds:

skip to 2.12 if you want melody >.>

[Summer Solace {durn}]

You appear to suck at music

That said, I loved it! Keep making more.

durn responds:

omg, you suck too! thanks! :)

[-Space pirates-]

Needs serious work

The lead melody is very annoying, you should use a different patch. The sound effects are annoying too and should just be removed. Drums are too loud and overpower the melody and the bass doesn't lock too well with them. It's also very repetitive, you have a theme but no variation. All music consists of theme and variation as shown through the classical style. You need to have development, return to the theme, more variation and an ending based on the theme for it to be true music.

Sorry but those are the rules.

[-=| Neon Filter |=-]

Alright

I've heard better music for breakfast. You have something going there with the electronics, but work needs to be done on the melody and structure. I could offer some assistance if you'd like. I have classical and electronic training and am always open to PM.

[-API- Bloodwax]

Merely okay

Your melody lacks tension and release. The whole thing is very unoriginal. In fact, I only see promise in the 4/4 kick drum and there's plenty of that already in existence. If you'd like, I give production lessons on my youtube page. I'm both classically and electronically trained and I'm willing to help.

[In this moment]

Gut

Es ist sehr punktlich. Ja! Schnitzelgruben. Ein flug mit dem gesicht ja danke es ist gut mir. Haha, ich hab ein grosses Schwollenkoch.

Squale responds:

What? xD
Thanks for the review. =)